Treasured
across the room
in watercolored gown;
my soul quivering with desire,
locked in anticipation of night’s end.
She slid out the door like a ghost;
dazzling sensual smiles;
gifts exchanged and
treasured.
Author notes
Option 5- And, all you asked me for was a smile.
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Comments
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The lies are strewn with beauty and mystery a very potent almost intoxicatingly captivating poem that makes me yearn to read it yet again and again hoping to find some new meaning lurking somewhere.The poem was enchanting almostmagical a joy to read and cherish in the imnd forever.Reminded me of the the day after my wedding.Thanks glad you shared please take care and never forget to share. Love, Smita...
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I love this poem
The style, the form, the words took me, ,lead me on, into another world..
beautifully done and that smile I visualised..
Thank you and best wishes
Julie
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