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On Wings of Night

On Wings of Night
The wings beat rhymically
A ruffled heartbeat
softly pounding
Overhead.

The inky black sky
with tiny microdots of light
sketchily highlight
the Branches of trees
Overhead.

On wings of Night
wings beating
Deliberately heading
Toward the secret Rendezvous
The sky yielding no secrets
Overhead.

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