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Broken In Two

Broken in two,
Sown up by the orders they scream at me
Trying to recognize what has so badly changed in my life
I am contemplating the feelings of devouring my puzzle like mind
What happened to my soul?
I only wonder why I stay locked up inside this life I so try to escape,
When they try to tell me what I should do with my life
I turn into the person I never really wanted to be.
Everyone keeps demanding for me to get a job, go to college, ect.
But no one knows what I really want in this dead-in life I am so deviously trying to destroy!
What I find inside this barrel of madness,
Is only what I can never really enjoy to devour into the nothingness of my despair.

Author notes

Wrote this after listening to 45 by Shinedown

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