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For My Best Friend

Friendship is something to hold on to
But for me that's not the case
Cause i don't feel i need to keep
Something that can't be erased

I am sure of what i have
Cause with you i have no doubt
For what we've built, can't ever fail
It's what i care about

I find it hard to describe
The thing that we share
Especially when there's nothing else
That ever could compare

Others always know
That together we will be
For there can never be another
Jade and Kelly

Those two words, known all over
Might aswell be one
Cause without a Jade, there is no Kelly
I'm sorry, it can't be done

For you're the "U", and im the"S"
And forever that will be
Cause together we make "US", and so
You complete me!

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    October 8

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    I have a dear friend like this in my life, you rarely saw her without me and me without her - we used to get alot of jokes over it but hey when you have a strong friendship like that who cares

    This is a beautiful dedication for your friend and I truly hope you show this to them as I'm sure they'll love it as much as I do

    I hope you enjoy AllPoetry and continue to share your words with us
    ♥
    Stay safe
    ~Manda
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  • Let.Love.In
    October 7

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    its a good poem and it made me think: what about them? whathave they been through?

    its like i want to know more... so maybe you can add a background to your poem?

    ~Torii