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Sunflower of LIfe....

The seeds planted
grown in my past
now taking root
teaching me more
of the fearful unknown.

He peers into my heart
unleashing my soul
granting my wish
to never be alone.

Like a sunflower
so tall and bright
my life is changing
with reverent flight.

The cement laiden walls
that surround my soul
are slowly coming down
because he loves me so!

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  • Tzipora
    November 11

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    Like a sunflower
    so tall and bright
    my life is changing
    with reverent flight.

    The cement laiden walls
    that surround my soul
    are slowly coming down
    because he loves me so!

    - i like these lines a lot. thi was very beautiful. well done.


  • Rick Weston silver member
    November 11
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    the power and impact of love given and recieved - tearing down walls.

    nicely expressed.

  • vivuyo
    November 1
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    nothing compares and can be compared to the feeling of loving and being loved in return..

    you articulate well! congrats!!!


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    October 10
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    i just love romantic poems of love.
    you have penned a beauty here Happy Heart
    and i love it!!

    with love and blessings

    Rend