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tenuous

 

 

i am small now;

curled inward upon myself
like charred parchment

too long left in the ash








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  • tara wilson gold member
    November 1

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    excellent brevity.


  • sideways hourglass
    October 30

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    out of the ridiculous amount of quickies entered into this prewrite contest, this is one of the best ones.


  • Saffron gold member
    October 26

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    This is absolutely beautiful--I can't even tell you how this really touches me. I adore it.

    Thank you so much for writing this and sharing your talent.

    Saffron


  • Cat gold member
    October 7

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    i agree with kathleen..
    i am moved by your words
    m

  • Rowan gold member
    October 7

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    so sad my friend. You are much, much larger than you think...
    this is hugely moving. sigh.


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 6

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    The ash will flow across hallowed ground and write a deeper legend into the sand than your footprints may know, Poet. How lovely and melancholy this is. Good luck in the contest, Sweetie.


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