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Graffiti Poem

Living life isn't just dodging death
Living life is enjoying each breath
Say to him who isn't blithe
Just take a second
LIVE YOUR LIFE

Author notes

This is what i would say to anybody who is out there on the grind. Yeah, things are tough but you gotta live and do itto the fullest; be thankful.

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  • tearrsofthemoon
    October 7

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    it's as if you are speaking to me...
    this is a wonderful write,
    i really love the words of this piece.
    thank you so much for sharing.


  • polly filla
    October 7

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    the 1st line works for me;

    "Living life isn't just dodging death"

    is punchy, easy to catch in passing, and makes me think without having to remember the rest of the poem.

    Thanks for your entry!


  • Eric Marsh
    October 6

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    great stuff the spirit of zen and the eternal "I"..... all wrapped up in this unique spiritual/existential poem,,,,,,excellent....