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Street Graffiti

life paints
with an unsteady hand
a pathway through pain

love etches
soul's destiny

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Prompt: Street Graffiti

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  • polly filla
    October 7
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    cool

    'LOVE ETCHES
    SOUL'S DESTINY'

    would be a great stencil! It would certainly make me think if I passed it on the street.


  • FransB gold member
    October 6

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    There's a tip-toe

    step in this poem; the saying: humans tread where ... Words sensitively written with imagery soft, but profound. The final stanza an awakening of the heart! Blessings. Frans


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    October 6

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    Awesome job with the prompt given. I'd love to see this painted somewhere instead of gang signs.
    Write on
    ~*~SP~*~


  • twelfthknight silver member
    October 6

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    This is brilliant So true and moving, great write, best of luck in the contest


  • Amera gold member
    October 6

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    Beautiful, Profound, inspiring and well penned.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • crivanea silver member
    October 6

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    second poem i've read from this contest...a great entry this one love it

  • Papagallo
    October 6
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    like it all. short but so profound.

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