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irony


Road to life is fenced with golden dreams,
you walk the path thinking its real.
Wanting, gathering,sacrifising, building bit by bit
and right then the illusion breaks and
you realise, you had hardly ever lived.

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5 lines..depicting the irony of life... you spend it thinking about tomorrow and life playsit trick never giving you your planned one.(tomorrow) .

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  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    October 7

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    Life DOES have a way of sneaking up on us, doesn't it?
    Poof! and you lived!!!
    I really like this; makes me think
    Thank you for sharing and all the very best to you!


  • wave1080
    October 7
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    true

    life itself is a paradox nice write .