Forgive me for all of the pain I have caused
my deepest regrets in life has all ways been the beat of my heart
now that she is no longer with us
I am no longer needed in life because
I can no longer bare the pain of denial
now that we are in death we are closer than we have ever been before
my love my only love you were the only love
that a man can ever have in his life
for as short as our course ran
we would be together all ways
Author notes
Chocolate
Think before you call this suicide does this person really have a broken heart or a heart full of lost love and hope?
Suicide is such an ugly word that people tend to get mixed up with so many times. Because so many experts who has studied human emotions can never understand the full power of the human heart in action.
A contest entry
- living death by xochocoholicxo.
1100 points, ended October 11, 41 entries
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Comments
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thanks for the freshwrite
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wow
you wrote this from the eprspective of a man and you pulled out an effective way to get about the intense closeness that the two souls enoyed.I love dthe poem just too much.Please visit me and comment me.
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