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Will I Dream



I purge the wall of time once again,
for another day, another time must begin.
How graceful we stride the time in a sleep
eternity now in a single leap

How time opens up an infinite stay
in bodies, in water, in dust, in clay.

I cast off the life of this one single day,
my time on this earth whittled away
will I go or will I stay

I wonder, will I dream

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Written April 9th, 2004

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  • leeeverage
    April 9, 2004
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    thanks for reading... il have to read some of your work somtime..

  • leeeverage
    April 9, 2004
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    thanx for reading.....and thanks for the warm welcome. il have to check out some of your work..


  • catz Moderators member
    April 9, 2004
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    A wonderful poem, leeeverage And so true, each day, each moment whittles away at our time on earth. Let us make the most of it, time.... a diminishing resource.

    A very good write

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  • April 9, 2004
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    i really like this poem... wow... keep writing and hope to see some more from you
    ~~Silver~~