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Lost In Space

I kept waiting for a message
from the man I loved a lot
kept typing little love notes
blank emails are all I got

Now he says he loves me
I am all his heart desired
but to fall in love with me
a computer was required

I keep getting blank emails
the words lost in cyber space
I took this computer apart
all gone without a trace

Then I really started thinking
this guy must be full of crap
he lies through his teeth
with the computer on his lap

Now I have his blank emails
sent directly to deleted file
I told him we were through  
but he still sits there in denial

Now he blames the computer
for breaking his heart in two
for erasing all his loving words
that told me "I love you"

So if you get a blank email
someday when you're on line
just click reply and send
those loving words were mine

 

 

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  • Sharon Marie gold member
    October 7

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    Cute poem

    Lol this is hilarious I couldn't stop laughing Love the little man up there on His computer great imagery funny and very humorous. brilliant!


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    October 6

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    Aww I often get accidental blank emails and always reply because you never know what you might be getting/missing This is a great write hun and I love the picture It is totally me


    • Sandygram
      October 7
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      Hello Sweet Amanda

      Always so nice to hear from you. I had some fun writing this. So glad you enjoyed it. Big hugs and Smiles for you. I hope the day brings you many more. Take care

      Peace and Grace
      Love Ya,
      Sandy


  • Ez Writer silver member
    October 6

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    I was wondering where all these blank
    E-mails were coming from , and
    who they were meant to be sent too .
    Now I know , that they were meant to
    be sent to you ! Love it !!
    Love you to Sandy , Hugs Easy

    • Sandygram
      October 7
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      Good Morning Easy

      Your lovely comment brings me a smile on a not so sunny day. You do always brighten my day when you stop by. Hugs and Smiles to you.

      Love and Blessings,
      Sandy


  • Poetic-Theorem gold member
    October 6

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    Sandy,
    I just adore this piece
    a blending od sadness and humor
    Way to go hun
    you stayed strong in the end and
    gave him a dose of his own medicine
    "Lost In space" what a clever title as well
    Much love and many blessings my friend
    Keep your talented quill dancing

    David

    • Sandygram
      October 7
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      Good Morning David

      How is my sweet friend this day? Your comment was so nice and starts my day of with a Big smile. Thank you for reading and being such a thoughtful friend. Hugs and smiles heading south in the fast lane. You take care.

      Bless You
      Love Ya,
      Sandy


  • Kastor
    October 6
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    I love you.


    • Sandygram
      October 7
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      Thank you for reading and commenting.It is appreciated. Take care, Sandy

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