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Here comes the pitiless gaze

Here comes the sun watching the rest burn
sinking in the depths where the fires do churn
they have been cursed to taste the flame
that never will cool and never will tame

serpents arise from the shadow in the  ashes
where a stream of fire and water clashes
swiftly they travel, a vapor in the air
feeding on the misery that billions share

Blistering, turning, weaving, showering with blame,
Muslim, Buddhist, Mormon, they hate you all the same.

and who will sentence you this fate?  A truth that never dies?
After seeing hell id say a champion of lies!

And what’s the crime that they all share?
Certainly something good and fair!
Like being born into the wrong state!
That’s enough to seal their fate!
Having virtue from another source,
that is enough to damn them of course!

If that is love im full of hate,
and I will not participate
In wishful thinking of other cultures demise,
believing blindly in a book of human lies,

Things Fall Apart, the center cannot hold,
the message that sends is mighty cold
If the west is the center of the son,
then your gaze is as pitiless as the sun  



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