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The Tunnels of E-haus

The air is cool and
a light breeze filters
in from the stone sky while
the water, like sighs and soft giggles,
trickles by my feet, spreads across
the cement and it's dark dark
dark there's not a drop of
light because no one needs it down
here I can finally breathe and
relax and be alone with You or just
me, myself, and I adore this grotto,
my haven, my peace, the tunnels.
Let's go.

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