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Obvious Ignorance

He's the only one playing The Game.
He's got the whole world in His hands like a basketball,
and He's the only one who can see the basket.
Lucky for us, we can't lose until we know.

I lust for the curse of inescapable truths.
Ignorance is bliss and pathetic, but
we are pigs in mud.

I want to play The Game, but I won't get out.
I want to know good and evil, but I won't get back in,
and it only takes
one loser to make us all winners.

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