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Twelve feet so ready to do the Lord's will,

only He can put an end to all the raining.

Ready to settle the world and empty their kettle of fears

are these six pretty angels in training.

 

 

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  • SamanthaSam gold member
    November 20
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    Congrats for Honorable Mention on this awesome poem. You did a lovely job on it. It gives you something to think about. Very good with imagery. Keep on penning and have a lovely evening.
    Hugs,
    Sam I Am


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    October 22
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    so lovely and sweet, thank you for adding this gentle piece in to my contest
    Linda


  • itsman
    October 11
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    nice write! Good luck... oh to be like a child and believe

  • Nafrititi
    October 9
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    Best!

    You are always the best.

  • No offense, but what is a kettle of fears? Why did you choose five angels? Is there a significance to that number? I like it. Good job!


  • nobumagawaX
    October 6
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    love it!!

    verry nice and sweet...i totally love it!!


  • awannabepoet
    October 6
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    Oh dude that is so sweet, way to go!

    Yes I can see the 10 feet just ready to bounce and prounce and spread joy all over the world.


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    October 6
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    Beautiful. That was so incredible. You did a great job on this, sweetie.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • Mango Memories gold member
    October 6
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    hmmm I didnt see that; shows what ones mind is like.

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