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Motions

movement is the most directly pure form of self expression
the intersection of
love violence prayer touch art
music sex rhythm gesture balance conversation

symbolic slavery
is truth in a physical form that calls for the impossible
freedom
such passion, as against another
breeds violence
stalemate, stasis
can your voice break through?
yes-we-can?
dizzy with hope we keep
working, grinding
away our lives

dancing our prayers in secret
only disturbing the dust for a moment

Author notes

Some thoughts on the movement of the human body. Kind of a tangent.

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