undecided ultimatums
and old wive's tales
agree with highschool besties,
and shopping spree sales.
you never hugged the shadow's neck.
i wasn't a shadow.
i was real, i was there, leaving my heart out in the open for you.
always.
you never kissed a silhouette, because girl,
i wasn't a silhouette.
Neither was our love.
It was real too, very real.
and something happened.
you haven't changed,
maybe your just afraid.
maybe you want freedom.
Your young, i can understand that.
It just hurts me that i gave you the chance to keep things on hold a while longer.
I told you it was a monopoly, and you said it didn't matter to you, you wanted it.
And now this............................
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Your honest thoughts please?
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and wive's shoud be wives' .....your editor.......very honest write. Stand tall, my man.
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Oh, Will. Sad poem.
Last three lines of third stanza, I think, the "your" should be "you're" or "you are".
I am so sorry you hurt. I love you. -
thnx for the comment sis. im fixin to head to sleep. i find myself sleeping on the couch a lot lately. for some reason its more comforting than my room. hmm. anyways, goodnight.
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our lives are unfinished, just as your lines...
(((hugs))) so i see you took your start and continued it a little while...maybe there is just some growing up that needs to happen for her before she's ready to commit to you or anyone...in the meantime, try to find a way to enjoy the free time you have now. calling it free time sounds harsh but seriously, dont go on being a sunflower on a rainy day, there is so much life to live...
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