Bending backwards
to touch the sky
Falling faster
wanting to fly
reaching back
not wanting to die
wings grace me
or dead i shall lie
all the while
i've been wondering why
must i bend backwards
to touch the sky
A contest entry
- Quickie NOW baby!! # 17 by Mango Memories.
400 points, ended October 6, 7 entries
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The flow of this piece is simply awesome. Must i bend backwards to touch the sky? Nice question. You use the power of words to create special meaning that sometimes are quite hard to find. One has to really digest to understand where oyu are coming from.
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Very smooth. Short, sweet to the point. why do we have to bend backwards to reach the sky? Good question. One that deserves an answer but seems to have none. This was great
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This is wonderful right , rhyming so smoothly. I like it.. good work My Friend
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Softly strong.
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Nicely done and rhymed, i always did like a rhyming quickie entry, why the fuck am i writing prose for these girls?
Very well done and best of luck... Scott 
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