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What is in beauty

that one could believe

perfect forms

shaped by the heavens

 

What is in beauty

that one could believe

twisting hearts

changed visions

 

What is in beauty

that one could believe

graceful horror

broken symmetry

 

What is in beauty

that one could believe

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  • condor gold member
    October 25

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    Quite a profound write once again. I often seem to see this in oyur writes. So much in the deep and the dark and yet it all makes perfect sense when one takes the time to hush and listen to your words. What is in beauty? I think you have managed to hit it right on the head with all of these things beacause beauty can take oyu in every dorection and show the the lovely and the horrific at once. Well done.


  • Eavan Max
    October 18

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    Very pretty Darc I really enjoyed this write. I love how you describe beauty it was cool.

    "What is in beauty

    that one could believe

    graceful horror

    broken symmetry"



    That is so true. Great job ans sorry haven't been around been sick plan on looking at more of your stuff.



  • Mango Memories gold member
    October 6
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    Brillantly written