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Love and Happiness

Warmth and Joy

The support of your girl

The comfort of your boy

These are...
things worth living for

these are...
things that matter

these are...
things that comfort you
in the wake of any disaster
Hold to that love,
it can ward off any evil.
If you always keep that happiness,
your joy will be unbelievable.
Support your boy,
Comfort your girl,
for if you do
you'll make it through this world.

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  • tidoubleguher
    October 30
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    ah, thats my beef. I need to find a boy to support me! Just kidding, this was a beautiful poem. Very free flowing.

  • This was a beautifully written piece you have here. I enjoyed reading this. It was very good. Anyways. keep up the awesome work.