The asphyxiating atmosphere makes it hard to breathe, capricious, conditional moods stifle tolerant thought. A self proclaimed debutante with pearls of wisdom so vague, I sometimes wonder at your dented psychosis. You swallow my sympathy with no tact, and spit the unsavory seeds to the side.
Author notes
Used in order given
3. Tiny Word Bank (must use all words) --> atmosphere, capricious, debutante, pearls, vague, dented, psychosis
A contest entry
- Quickie!!!!! Enter or burn! by Heroesrox.
400 points, ended October 5, 5 entries
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Absolutely great use of a word bank. It makes perfect sense and rolls off the tongue effortlessly.
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Very nice. That debutante sounds like a royal bitch! Haha! Thanks so much for entering and doing such a fantastic job with the given words. You made this appear seemless and I look for that above all else when scoring a piece written with a wordbank. Best wishes.
Good luck to you.
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smooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooth & silk come to mind
such a lovely little short-prosey piece. i think we're rubbing off on you quite well
♥ kate
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shiz. You know wat; that is one hell of a good word bank.
You do prose good
Next collab is def. prose
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Wonderfully written, you did a great job especially for using the words in order.
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