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Haiku ~ determination.

Tiny wings flutter,
little chirper moves forth and
beats against a storm.











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  • ZachP silver member
    November 5

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    I wish I was better at writing haiku . . .
    This is absolutely brilliant, cherie.
    I love the image that you've captured here.

    Best wishes,
    Zach Estel.


  • Swan song gold member
    October 17

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    i like this usullay i do not like using and in haiku or the but sometimes one has not choice

  • SoulWhispher
    October 9

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    Daughter a most moving statement of determination, Dad