She wanted to break the mirror in her room
She wanted to cause herself external doom
Hands and arms wrapped in lace
Each line seemed to be in a race
To see which could cause more crimson red
They were both at a tie no matter how much they bled
One had to win no matter the cost
That day two won and one lost
The girl lay on the floor bleeding out
The blood puddled on the floor around her adding to her doubt
She knew that she was going to die
There was no reason to give out a cry
No one was home and she would not be heard
So instead she whispered her final word
She asked for forgiveness from her one true friend
Those girls last words were her final end
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Comments
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i like this poem...you can feel the sadness in it and the pain. it's got a good flow. it's a good piece.
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This is a really sad poem, but it is well written, and i really like the last stanza
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