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rain & snow & rainy snow & rainy music for rain & rainy snow & I don't know

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  • Strawberry Jam
    October 16

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    well, you must really be liked if people give you three clappies for a sentence. What a wonderful sentence it is, by the way. I like to follow the crowd, though. I like rain(I like things with rain in it ) and I think you deserve three clappies anyway.

  • Rain, rain, rain... you have to love it... This was interesting

    keep on writing with ink that never fade...

    illusion


  • Mango Memories gold member
    October 6
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    Clappys for nothing! yay


  • Gibson0918
    October 6
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    I like it.