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Matthew

Honey, I love you
Promise me you love me too
It's okay to love me
I know you want to

Don't pretend around them
They don't even know us
You talk too much
Just hush

Silently
Kiss me
Eyes closed
Forever

Author notes

about my boyfriend

I'm liek real ammateur i know. It's bad just tell me what yew think of this..?

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Violet Moodswing Greeters member
    October 5

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    I like this. It is very vivid even though it is brief and to the point. I loved the third stanza. Even though it consists of few words, a person can see the experience of the kiss. Nicely done and an enjoyable read.

    Keep penning

    Violet
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