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2009

I sat to write a poem or song about how I felt
But all I could do was stare at this computer
Listen to the music that is playing
and sigh
I'm so cold and tired
drenched from the rain
wearied by it
pained and wretched
Everything feels like a black and white photograph
Nothing will ever be as it was before
Fun, Care-free, safe or pleasant
I am suffering from Life
and every living creature is a cell-mate
trapped
drowning in oxygen
I'm so cold and tired
sick of it all
A Lone wolf in Concrete Hell
Making a pact
Survival
Is the only thing i've got
Sleep
the only comfort
Death
the long-term goal

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