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Glass And Band Aides...Only Help So Much...Perhaps Paper Mache?

Dear Broken Heart,
Yes I know
I feel you down there
I know you still beat
Irreguarlly, as if to say
'I can't ever be the same'
I know we never saw it coming
I promise I would have told you if I knew
But we were blindsighted and now...
Now were left to pick you up
Off that cold cobblestone floor
He wanted us to meet him
Out in the woods, next to the fallen castle
It once was a castle,
Like you were once together.
Made of nothing but fallen trees
And old coblestone marbles
It was our home
To be together...
I know you follow right up to here
Its where I myself get dazed as well...
But here I must say...is where he left us
In a few simple words
'I found someone else'
Who is she I don't know
All I know is this is the moment...
The very instant I started falling
You know, this is when you dear broken heart
Started falling...so far into abyss
I could almost hear the crash
As the microthin walls that held you together
Were smashed in a million pieces.
The light in my eyes left
The bounce in my hair is no more..
The smile that lit up my day
Left when you walked away
I cried on the stones
For god knows how long
Simply praying this was a night terror
But it wasn't...
I must have passed out...
For when I awoke...
All that was left was our black night
Our stars
Our beautiful full moon...
It illuminated the castle..
Which was now a ghost town
I felt the blood on the floor
The warm sensation at my fingertips
It was my heart
Bleeding from the inside out...
And yet, I didn't know when I saw him
How much I would love him...
Now I walk back to my house
Stumbling the whole way...
I stare in the warm bright windows
Not wanting to enter...
So I walk to the park
And my heart quits.
For 5 seconds of my life, I felt dead.
You and her...kissing on the bench.
No OUR bench.
'You bastard!' I cry
I run from the place
Crying so hard I can't see...
I don't know how we manage heart...
Seeing him with her is enough to kill
What about next time?
So let's put some duct tape...
Or even a band aid...
And pray...
No not pray
HE was never there for us
He let him walk away!
Were alone..so ill wish on our star
And hope for tomorrow...
That one day
You'll leave her arms...for mine...
So broken heart...
What do we do?
Its up to you...
You have to decide
What's best for us
I promise ill go along
Just be sure...
Okay little heart?
No more tape...
Just mend and be careful...
I will always beat for you little heart
Never fear...we have each other
And we know our pain.
As one...

Love,
Your body and soul

came out of thin air...i hope he leaves her...i dont know how my heart and i would survive...

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  • AsheAngel
    October 7
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    LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and sis I know how it feels and knowing him and her it may not be as soon as we think


  • zhaniswolf
    October 6

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    honestly, he's a jerk; totally not worth your time. Who's to say if he comes back to you he won't leave again? I know that doesn't help a broken heart very much, but it's the truth. I hope you and your heart can mend and pick up your life again. Great poem by the way; excellent words of choice. Beautiful painful write. I'm sorry.


    • Emmabug
      October 8
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      I never had something to where the guy immediately went to some chick, but asheangel did which is where the inspiration came from.