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Message to Myself

how can i
get you to smile
how can i get you to laugh
how can i get you to be happy
and forget about your past

how can i
help you to make it through
stop crying
and believe dreams do come true

how can i
help you to keep up the fight
and not let go
even if that seems right

how can i
get you to stop using the knife
how can i get you to think
before you decide to end your life

how can i
ever make you see
what your doing to yourself
and what your turning out to be

how can i
get you to realize
to accept who you are
and not keep everthing
locked up deep inside

how can i
get you to realize
you have done nothing wrong
just please dont give up
i know you can stay strong

how can i
help you to build self esteem
and wake up from this nightmare
that we wish was just a dream

so now to look back on those memories
of everything thats been said
my message is crying out
wanting to be read











Author notes

this lives after its name a mesage to myself
for it is because of how i am
and yeauh
~me~
Written April 8th, 2004

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  • August 24, 2004
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    wow this is really good. sometimes ive felt like that and other times when i wanted to help someone like that. anyway i hope you do find a way to feel better and smile and suff.

  • AphroditesBeauty
    April 11, 2004
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    I can relate so much with every single word. I went through a period of depression during the months of january and february 2004 with the cutting tears and all. I will add you to my favorites.

  • Am
    April 8, 2004
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    I hope that you dont really think lyke this becuz there is no reason no matter what is going on in your life to feel that you arent worth anything and to feel that taking ur own life away from u is tha best thing to do.. U know what, you are going to have alot of bad days, but when you have those days just know that they are gonna get better no matter how long it takes, ur days arent going to stay tha same, so stop thinkin like that and get back to reality becuz even tho i dont know u i dont want to wake up and c u on tv, becuz of doing something stupid that could have been prevented if u had someone to talk to...

  • Am
    April 8, 2004
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    I hopw that you dont really think lyke this becuz there is no reason no matter what is going on in your life to feel that you arent worth anything and to feel that taking ur own life away from u is tha best thing to do.. U know what, you are going to have alot of bad days, but when you have those days just know that they are gonna get better no matter how long it takes, ur days arent going to stay tha same, so stop thinkin like that and get back to reality becuz even tho i dont know u i dont want to wake up and c u on tv, becuz of doing something stupid that could have been prevented if u had someone to talk to...


  • Jesica Smart
    April 8, 2004
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    I like this alot.. reminds me of things my friends say to me.. good job!

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