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Iconic Dream

Capturing my thoughts, my breath,
My soul -
The dream of ecstasy,
Overwhelming diseased passions,
The clumsy upheaval of guitar serenades -

I listen listlessly,
Without thought,
Only passion upon passion,
Whatever the rustic fasion
Is

B-flat rifts,
Harmonic interludes,
Pentonic serendipity,
As ecstasy becomes the norm

Like the wafting air,
Plunging into lungs forever,
And ever
To the dawning of oblivion

I love endlessly -
A seamless dream -
Perfect melancholy,
Chaos perfected

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