slide the cold metal across my skin
let the hot, dark liquid run
make me feel
make me pay for all I did
slide the sharp knife across my wrists
spill it all and just leave me
I don't want your pity
I don't want your sorrow
I just want to feel...
Author notes
I basically promised my friend that I wouldn't cut anymore...I just need time is all.
please tell me what you think
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it gdgd
I can relate alot to this.. aswell as the promise yu made.. i to have made the same promise.. hope yu suceed
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baby u better not cut anymore im done like u can do it its not hard when u put your mind 2 it
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I stopped when you did. I wrote this so I wouldn't acutally. I promised that I would stop and I did. <3
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I can relate to this all too well. I sometimes try to still cut. I know cutting isn't a good thing but it was only a way I could feel as well. Its hard to stop once your used to it.
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Wow
This is raw. But you do an excellent job describing the pain and release and emotion. "slid" is past tense, I think it might read better "slide the cold metal" instead, but that's your choice. Well done, and keep your word to your friend purple.
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thank you =)
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Cutting....
.... has become an issue in my household as of recent I am dead set against it for I too used to cut, for it was the only way I could feel. That is a sign that one needs serious help, I know and can say this because I needed serious help. As long as it is not being done for an attention ploy or sympathy then yes help is needed. I can only say that when you hurt yourself you hurt those that love you , and yes that included you adopted uncle as well.
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thank you uncle
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lovely
wonderful write message me if you wish to talk about this -
lovely
good write . i know how it feels only all to well . after time things might get easier but the pain as you may find out never will. the sadness and pain of our pasts linger even as we grow older . what you must do is search for the inner strength inside yourself to keep going. -
lovely
good write . i know how it feels only all to well . after time things might get easier but the pain as you may find out never will. the sadness and pain of our pasts linger even as we grow older . what you must do is search for the inner strength inside yourself to keep going. after all we live but once. clara snow -
lovely
good write . i know how it feels only all to well . after time things might get easier but the pain as you may find out never will. the sadness and pain of our pasts linger even as we grow older . what you must do is search for the inner strength inside yourself to keep going. afterall we live but once. clara snow -
Wow this is good. I really enjoyed reading this. I liked the way this one flowed. I am sure that some people can realte too this some how. Anyways. Keep up the good work.
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i like it i can relate to that feeling also
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