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hope



brevity was never my strong point,

but still, lets condense to a single point

I hope





and hopefully make hoping real



Author notes

second try is a bit more sucinct... if you wanna, check out dreams - I wrote it for this, but it got too long

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  • Saffron gold member
    October 24

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    "I hope"

    I think those words are far stronger than what many people realize--wasn't Hope the last thing to be unleashed from Pandora's box? Without going into great detail, the few words you have presented here are ones that mean so much to me and my family right now.

    Thank you so much for entering this into the contest--I am very happy to see your words here.

    Saffron