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Smiles

The sky is a deep unbelieveable blue
With wind that makes you shiver as if you were in dead winter
Your dress moves with the music and harmony
Curing the world with it's lovley lullaby
The waves dance and twirl to the music
Makeing you smile with the effect you get
Lovly sound, that makes the world stop with one tone
Hold your breath, untill the world moves on again
But keep playing that music, that no one will forget


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Prompt 3

A contest entry

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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    October 12
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    I enjoyed reading your poem very much. thank you for taking the time to enter my contest.

    good luck
    Kat