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Death Be To Me

Kill me tonight
So I wont shed any tears
For losing the ones
Who died by their fears

Take this away
The sensations unreal
I don’t wanna care
I don’t want to feel

I rather be empty
Then to hold this all in
I just want to scream
And let the pain begin

One, two, three
With these eyes I see
Four, five, six
The beat I cant miss

Holding my breath
Losing my grip
Maybe I’m lost
On a very bad trip

Tonight will be the end
I hold no regrets
This will all end
With the price of my death

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  • goalsv
    October 5

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    Great rhyme and flow! You showd the feelngs of confusion and saddness. Sure hope it is not your feelings and just a thought.for others