Incredible
Edible
Delectable
Erectable
Gentle hands caressing bare chest,
I’ll squeeze your hips
and you'll bite your lips.
Stray from the path for me, my dear
I love just having you near...
You excite me.
You delight me.
Passion is borne from a spark.
Here we lie,
on fire inside.
You make me feel alive.
Belt and pants aside
I’ll slide my hand down your thigh.
Will you sigh?
Passion like a gunshot to my spine.
Pleasuring to hear your moans
stoking the flame of the forbidden passion we share.
As our lips touch,
the fire shall erupt.
Pleasing and teasing as we lie,
forever entwined.
Hush... Be silent…
no one can learn of our passion.
Bite me if you must,
it fuels the bone-deep lust.
Rubbing you. Caressing you.
I want to make you scream.
You're touching my special place;
Making no mistakes.
Desiring you desiring me,
loving you and your personality.
Passionate night
Filled to the brim with delight
.:.
Author notes
Lust
xxCrissyxx
This really happened, and I will never share the full story. ^^
A contest entry
- The Seven Deadly Sins: A Contest by Nienna Calmcacil.
700 points, ended October 24, 2009, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Haha.. Wat you think?
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Maybe my virgin eyes don't want to know the whole story. hahahaha...
I had an issue with your poem's structure. Most it was from rhyming...some stanzas had it, some did not. This completely disrupted the flow of the poem, and it was very distracting. And obviously you portrayed lust well, using imagery and emotion, but the poem's structure completely set your poem off balance.. Otherwise, your poem was good, but not great. Sorry.. =/
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Very nice!
Seductive, smooth and sexy!
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Belt and pants aside
I'll slide my hand down your thigh.....
Wow..that turns me on
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haha It's supposed to do that. ^^
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