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Fighting against darkness

I think I’m on my way
but I can’t go just yet,
there’s to many things
that I still have to say .
You couldn’t save me,
and it’s not your fault.
I really do love you all
but this is my last call.
I need to end my hate
for this designated fate,
escape from this prison
that all of them call life.

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