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onyx and ebony girl k

xxXxOnyxXxx k
She is all that *g*l*i*t*t*e*r*s*
In her (world)
An ~innocent~ .**.Fairy Queen.**. girl
xoxoxThenxoxox a [man] came along @nd BrOuGhT her
down
For “*’sticking’*” by him she !s truly a #clown#
from ***cotton candy*** .:.*.pink.*.:. she changes to a xxXXonyxXXxx and xoxoxoxoxebonyxoxoxoxox .:.*.girl.*.:. . k
black velvet dresses with a colourful silver @@@@@swirl@@@@@
With his drug (((heroine ,
cocaine,
ecstasy ,
marijuana)) XxhabitXx he becomes hot
she fears that with his xxXxXmadnessxXxXxx that one day she will get
..._...|..____________________, ,
....../ `---___________----_____|] = = = = = D
...../_==o;;;;;;;;_______.:/
.....), ---.(_(__) /
....// (..) ), ----"
...//___//
..//___//
.//___// shot

K After every –forced— kiss with [s][h][a][t][t][e][r][e][d] .g.l.a.s.s. taste -
She has ***mascara*** tears her face
down
His {bitter sweet} l♥ve and black _e_y_e_l_i_n_e_r phase
      ((S))
          ((P))
      ((I))
          ((R))
    ((A))
          ((L))
      ((E))
          ((D))
*Her down a road of sinful craze ♥ * k
The Goth girl ([{(exiles)}]) herself from the ,.e.,.a.,.r.,t.,.h,.
.•*special @nd magic@l from birth.•*
she’s like *Edgar Allen Poe’s* (raven) love ♥ , xXxxLenorexxXx
……….
oOo----- graceful------oOo but 0oovampyoo0 she sits on a
***night sky marble floor***
she –injects- blue [{(venom)}] in her %veins% to ^color her
~~~red blood blue~~~
xXxshimmeringxXx powder and white foundation
.*:.fashion.*:. eyelashes in place with glue♪♪
……….
.:..snort..:. .s.u.g.a.r.y. ~cocaine~ and >.>sneeze<.< out *glitter*
(crack) *whore* {style} without the • Kate moss • waif –l-i-t-t-e-r-
[blue black] xXxcoloredxXx hair with ***extensions***
on her [w][r][i][s][t][s] $ tennis $@@@ bracelet@@@&friendship charms-
to |cover| her /c/u/t/t/i/n/g/ .*.obsessions.*:.
Onyx LiPStIcK & (candid) skin tone so *porcelain* and `fair`.
she has a bl@ck&wh!te .*.contrast.*. with her (s)(k)(i)(n) and hair
……….
…:::…baby’s breath…:::… and black and blue -----roses---@
[{(like her bruises .k)}]
she’s constantly .*.*.*dreaming.*.*.* and needs to wakeup
(eyes) [hidden] {behind} a ***.*.Marie Antoinette***.*.
*~.Masquerade.~*.*{[(mask)]}*. with .~*.intricacy.*~. -
with a wonderful >.pattern<.< as a spider web,
.~*:.woven.*~.flawlessly.
She ^kneels^ in her ***sequin***,$onyx$ dress colored black
down
.*:.wishing.*:.for
[s][o][m][e][o][n][e] [t][o] [c][o][m][e] [a][l][o][n][g]
……….and +add+ the color that she lacks.........
she lives in an .:.eternity.:. were every (day) is [night]
she is as ..*.*.:.*.*.mystical.*.*.:..*. as the
((moon)) [within] her #*.misty.*# xxXxxveilxxXxx .
……….
• dreams of tulle and lace style • th@t for her c@n *never fail*
she needs to (ditch )her =violent= [tattooed] .*:.sanguine.*. Love ♥.
for SoMeOnE that is pointed > out to her from *angels* ^above^
.*.:.she needs someone.*:.
to ~glue~ .:.her.:. ♥ heart♥ .*:.back.*:. *together* sOmEoNE to )turn(.k her :::winter::: cold into .*.summer.*:. weather
so she can • paint • her black ~fingernails~ a =)happy=).:.*.pink.*:.
Someone to _s_t_e_e_r_ k her .:.•.*..ship.*•.:. and not make it S
i
n
k
someone taht has a colourful personality , and not taht of a brick wall
she will get someone to chatch her when she f
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a hopless ..o..x...romantic...o...x... onyx girl , adds more *glitter* in her world

...*...the end...*...k


k
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(¸.•´ (¸.•wonderful k
K
Dirty Pretty Poem by Katrina
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* ♥ * ♥ Katrina ♥ * ♥ *
¸.•*(¸.•*´♥`*•.¸)*•.

k

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a dirty pretty poem  atht i write recentley on word, i hope you like it . k

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  • Kathraina silver member
    October 5

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    Stunning dirty pretty! I do love dirty pretty a lot and the way you did this is absolutely amazing! I quite admire it. But form aside, while a lot of the imagery and word choice was spot on some of it seemed forced and not all the way thought out. Never let the creativity of this form restrict your word usage or make you add too much. Dirty pretty is really to keep the piece and form of it all together nicely. You've done quite well here, but the piece itself could use a tad more work. And I'm saying this so that you can improve; because so far you've got an amazing thing going here

    bravo and thank you for entering





    ♥ kate