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so help me





why you gotta drink your
life away

girl


when waiting arms
of peace
is waiting
in the car
outside



you scream
no no no




so help me jesus
jesus
jesus
jesus....













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  • light to a dreamer gold member
    November 15
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    Well Done With Great Hope!

    Most don't see what they do to the ones they love until the life they have is no longer with that person. And yes life is hard but to turn away from the hard and turn up a drink is wrong and it will still be there when the drink is gone. To turn to god is good but to talk to the person is better just add what god has shown you to deal with them and their drink!


  • pitprincess
    October 26

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    If anyone understands this, I do! This gets to me as it is in touch with something that is close to me; why you gotta drink your
    life away

    girl


    when waiting arms
    of peace
    is waiting
    in the car
    outside

    It makes one think, what can I do to make a change in someones life. I hope that this is not part of your life as it is mine. It is rough to make your heart and mind understand others.
    Wonderful write and so true.