Summer came, summer went
with heavy hearts and wallets now all spent
can I sit next to you?
Tears on pages, a book of dreams
Inside jokes are busting at the seams
can I laugh next to you?
Can we get it figured out
Can I let my feelings out - yeah?
You are so amazing
I wish I could prove it
I'd write you letters, pages
and I know you'd refuse
You are my water
In your love, I drown
The sky's the limit, dear
But oh I want to be on your ground
Say, can I sit next to you?
Baby, baby please don't tease me
Honey, no, no, just take it easy.
Your spinning around on your tip toes
A brush of face, nose to nose.
She knows, she knows,
can I sit next to you?
You are so amazing
I wish I could prove it
I'd write you letters, pages
and I know you'd refuse
You are my water
In your love, I drown
The sky's the limit, dear
But oh I want to be on your ground
You are so amazing
I wish I could prove it, proving you
I'd write you letters, pages
and I know you'd refuse
You are my water
In your love, I drown
It's hide and seek for lovers
I hope we're never found
And oh, oh no.
You know, oh oh.
Summer came, summer went
with heavy hearts and wallets now all spent
can I sit next to you?
Author notes
So I just broke up with my girlfriend Friday because I have a lot of things going on right now and I can't bear to make her go through it all with me. It's a big ghetto mess. I WAS a big ghetto mess. Until a girl I used to like a summer ago came to help me out of a dark space. She's always doing that 
We both broke up with the ones we were with on Friday. Both for our own reasons. But... I realized... I'm still in love with that girl from the Summer when I sat next to her. I think she knows, too. This one's for her. A long work in progress, finally finished.
What do you think?
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i really like it even though because I'm only 14 "goin gout" can't happen without some supervision which would suck so I don't really get it but I think the song has a lot of impact.
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Thank you so very much
Haha, it'll never change. I'm 17 and mom still watches me like a hawk 
But thank you so much, means a lot to me!
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Wow that was beautiful Bryan. I'm sad to hear you broke-up, and it's such a coincidence you found the girl from summer. I'm still single, but I've crushed on many guys.
Teehee.
You are my water
In your love, I drown
The sky's the limit, dear
But oh I want to be on your ground
Say, can I sit next to you?
That has to be my favorite part; definitely. Again, it was a lovely poem that captured my heart. Keep up the good work!!!
Best Regards,
Claire
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Thank you! :3 Haha, yeah. I'm actually talking to her via MSN right now. Oh, the heartbreak. XD Thanks so muhc!!
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this is really good...did you write music for it? or is it just an unfinished song sorta thing?
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Thank you!! I'm not exactly great at writing accompaniments, I'm hoping maybe in time a friend will happen by and give me a helping hand. Thanks so much again!
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I always love your poetry. thanks for sharing yet again. I riecently broke up with someone, but it was ok i guess because i think deep down we knew we were just friends.
In your love, I drown
It's hide and seek for lovers
I hope we're never found.
I love this line so so much!
Keep writing!
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Aww haha thanks so much!! Yeah, I know what you mean. It sucks, but that's the whole point in dating really. Sorting out friends from the ones you get friendly with.
Thanks again! I'll do my best
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