Let us make love over and over again
As though it were a fairytale that never ends.
If you were my book the letters of your words
Would be carved in my heart;
And not just read, but one that is felt.
I want to love you in a special way like glass,
strong but crystal clear.
I want to make love to your spirit
As my heart squeezes yours and mine together
So tightly our minds explode,
And we no longer think.
I yearn to stroke you gently and softly
Caressing not only your spirit,
But to feel the warmth of your flesh.
Your body next to mine,
Holding and embracing your being
With the connection of a lock and key of life
And a love so strong you can't let go.
Oh! Let me love you hard and long
To drill through your hurts and pains,
Using our love as a shield for your heart
To guard your heart from trials and tribulations.
That is the only way to love
And to make love
A contest entry
- give me, give me sweet loving by Rheea.
900 points, ended October 17, 19 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Lovelorn by poster.
360 points, ended October 17, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Congratulations Jim on the Gold!! YEAH!!!
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Hello old friend I know of only one who writes this way have not read you in a long time.. beautiful . Jim.
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"only one who writes this way" What a beautiful compliment
Thank you
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Interesting poem but unfortunately not written to the contest prompt of lovelorn ... which means lacking or deprived of love.
thanking you for this entry nevertheless -
My favorite parts of this poem are: the first stanza,
"I want to love you in a special way like glass,
strong but crystal clear." and
"With the connection of a lock and key of life
And a love so strong you can't let go."
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Such a beautiful and lovely poem. ahh I do so miss your poems. This is the way love should be. Beautiful and tender. Excellent write.
Good luck
Kat
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