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mommy

a painless fall
a hurt filled blow to the head she's probably all ready dead'

think about it what you did is hunting you with this sick passion that you loved her,

i bet you did but know she's dead and you have no one to tell your story to,

your story  of pain and hurt that drove you to do what you did, what you didnt mean to do but did,

 you never meant to push her as hard as you did and your crying "Mommy oh, Mommy wake up!"

but she never will you were angry so from your playpin you shoved and she hit her on the floor

no it's blood splattered and you dont know what to do.

think about it

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