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Make me worth saving

I'm choking for air
Life is being pulled away
Please give me your hand



& make me worth saving <3

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This is a Haiku poem. Even if there is an extra line. Anyways, this is short but to the point. I enjoyed writing it, I hope you enjoy it too =)

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  • StoneGoddess
    November 15

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    i liked this one alot, short but full of emotion and i can definitely relate. i like alot of your poems, keep writing.


  • My Last Breath.x
    October 5

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    Yes, I did enjoy it. And length doesn't matter (pardon the pun) .. It was a beautiful poem Kandace, and you are worth saving. More than you know baby. I love you <3