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palm of silence

Missing image

            he painted

each kiss on her lips

with a touch
                  of glitter


and

she felt something
in his eyes

that reminded her

of the void

between every second

but in quiet

                 moments
they wondered

should a gust of passion
tickle dips
          and curves


if they would be lifted
into the palm of
                             silence

 

 

 

 

 

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image credit: glitter drop by =glowingkitten

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  • perfectsunset gold member
    November 9

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    wow, this was equisite.
    I love the metaphor,
    the visuals and touch
    of sensuality.

    Beautifully worded.

    Love it


  • sweet arrival gold member
    October 5

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    can't even tell you what tickling dips and curves did. lol...
    you write in the most beautiful ways.