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Safe & Secure

Sitting in my room
There is music playing
Movies running on a small screen
The night is cool
The night is quiet outside
As the moon shines into my room
My sheets are soft
My pillows softer
Four strong walls surround me
But …

Though I have everything
I feel alone
I also feel scared
Even though the music and the voices
Jump at me through the small screen
I still feel alone
But …

As I close my eyes
As I call your name
Suddenly I am lifted
Lifted from fear
Lifted from anxiety
To a place
Hard to describe
To a place that is peaceful
A place that is safe
A place of love
Lord, with you
I am safe
I am loved
I am safe and secure




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  • yes I agree with the truth you realise HIS name keeps us lifted...every time..and all the time..this is a great realisation..if one can have..well done...


  • darlee77 gold member
    October 5
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    This is so elegantly and lovingly written. Simple wording. powerful meaning. The best kind. Very good. God bless.


    • Ruetry
      October 5
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      Thank you, May God Bless you too. Hope you have a blessed day