lovely beauty flies
as they dance their one last dance
beauty comes to rest
A contest entry
- THE LAST BUTTERFLIES HAIKU by Swan song.
700 points, ended October 17, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i love line two and three Well done thank you for entering
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d'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww pretty
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wow
and what happened...yes eevrythin ahs an endand a cessation...all good things come to an end. This was the real emssage i got here. and you did that so beautifully.thanks for sharing -
Awww
Lovely -
speaks valumes.. great write.. great work...
blessed be
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"beauty comes to rest"
wow that is truely a concept i never thought about. i never thought
that beautry could rest. but i love the words. good job!!!
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This is such a pretty poem, I love how you referred to them as beauty flies.
Very well written with elegance and delicate grace. I wish you luck in the contest my friend.
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