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Brittle


Brittle
Remnants of who
I was
Trip upon frozen
Terrabytes -- my
Life,
Exposed.


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This is an acrostic.

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  • abu nuwas
    October 20

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    Hearty congrats!

    I don't like acrostics really- they seem so artificial. Yet this is v neat, and yes, just like a few shards. Well done


  • Zeros Nightmare
    October 13

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    Interesting... I've never been good at acrostics but I've also never seen one this great. Congrats!


  • VoltaicHypnosis gold member
    October 5

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    excellent, the first acrostic I've seen in a long time....

    • Lilac Moon silver member
      October 5
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      Thank you so much for silver and for the comment

      Lilac Moon

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