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The Last Butterflies

One last tear
For wings that were bright as day
tranquility here

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  • Swan song gold member
    October 17
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    cute rhyme in this ku thank you for your poem


  • MoonStarRaven silver member
    October 5

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    I love the metaphoric beauty of this poem. its sad yet peaceful. You make the death of a butterfly sound so pretty. O.o