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Contra-Indicated

bewildered
I know life is absolute
excluding those that chose
to move to naught

that incomplete full circle of distraught

now start all over
clover for your thought
exceptional the simple
and the odd

distrust the truth embracing fake and fraud

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  • deercatcher
    October 5

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    "the way of the cross is foolishness to them that perish..."


  • neurosine gold member
    October 5

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    This seemed like remnants of other thoughts strewn together. Ironically, I didn't feel that full circle connection, nor some lovely pungent onion from which to peel away layers. I do get though that the reader is half of the equation, and their mind-state, at least 40% of the rest. The writer only contributes.


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    October 5

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    over and over to start again and again and nothing no matter what you do will make it right .. and through the darkest eyes to fight the fraudulent foe awesome hun Hugs Angel♥

  • Bob Fox
    October 5

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    Poet

    And the song ' Young at heart ' comes to mind. Embrace the wonders of life. Never look back and always enjoy the splendor of an excellent poets words.


  • donnz
    October 5
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    well put

    As if believing is the key

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