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Coming Back to the Old House ~ re-post



Coming back to the old house
I feel a sense of emptiness
when I look in your special corner
or find one of the old ‘R’s’

that you wrote on everything

The height scales on the wall
where we measured out your years
I can see circles of toy horses on the floor
the tape’s still there where we made ramps

for racing Hot Wheel cars
The pool is filled with Pound Puppies again


I wish it were sunny and the water crystal clear
we’d play catch and skim inner tubes
like summer never ends
I'd watch you race your mom across the blue



Sometimes you say

we don't love you as much
as we did when you were little

how wrong you are
we've loved you more each day


You're growing up
will go on and do great things
remember all of us at this old place
and the times we had these many perfect years

It’s empty here tonight
I’m feeling blue
I will read Uncle Remus outloud

at bedtime

just for you

 

 

 

 

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  • im just human
    November 18
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    i love your poetry so much


  • Emmyb gold member
    October 7
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    i recognise this...
    and i swear i commented... didnt i?

    its good though david. again.


  • sweet arrival gold member
    October 5
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    i loved this the first time, too.
    your daughter is beautiful, and i hope she got the talent and kindness her dad has so much of.

  • Rowan gold member
    October 5
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    Thanks for reposting.
    This makes me feel very nostalgic.


  • Ellegirl silver member
    October 5

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    Don't let your copy of Uncle Remus ever get dusty and for now forget and
    leave her cellphone charger at the farm...and she'll be back!
    The dish is up and running TOO!


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    October 5
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    I remember this one.

    M
    (Born and bred in the briar patch)

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