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The Key to Eternity

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The old key hung from a nail
in my grandmother’s small home.
Years left a key shaped mark
on the wall beneath.

      What does it unlock?

The question never asked
until I was older.
Gram just smiled,
said I’d understand someday.

      Was it for a door?

Her one true love,
passed years before,
sudden and unexpected.
Perhaps his hands had driven the nail,
tied the string,
hung the key.

      It waited silently for its purpose.

Gram died on a cold winter day,
alone in her chair,
hands folded,
a smile,
the old key upon her chest.

      I understood.

The key had found its purpose.
The unseen door unlocked,
her love patiently waiting.
Hand in hand,
they walked into that eternal life.

      Together forever.



      That key shaped mark on the wall?

          Only the nail remained.




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Image credit - jpg - hanging keylr - Paul Naples

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  • shattered.frisco
    October 20

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    So beautiful!! This was such a
    very refreshing write to read.
    It was like a breath of fresh air
    to read something so beautiful.


  • Ez Writer silver member
    October 7

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    A beautiful , warm and heart touching
    poem , darn near brings a tear to the eye !
    Thank you for sharing this with us Paul !!
    Best regards , Friend Easy


  • west-word
    October 6
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    Wow!! great emotion!!!

  • Ethiriel
    October 6

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    THat made me cry. Made me think of my granny and pap who had a love like that.


    • An Old Codger gold member
      October 6
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      Thank you very much. I agree, that on the surface, this is quite sad, but how wonderful is it to have known that kind of lasting love? My grandparents had it and so far (30 years) my wife and I have had it. Some would call it an old fashioned notion but then they complain that they can't find true love. It takes two committed hearts and a load of work.

      Thanks for reading.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    October 5

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    wow..

    a very touching, somewhat eerie piece, but in a good haunting type of way..
    like this dude.. you sure have the storyteller deeply rooted in you..


    • An Old Codger gold member
      October 5
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      Awwww, you're way too kind my friend. However, like most folks, I'll take the ego lift with a big thank you.


  • crivanea silver member
    October 5

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    omg!! that's sooo sad!!! i love this! beautifully put


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 5

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    Beauty-full, Cowboy.



  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    October 5

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    See, this is how to allude to a tired old cliche!!!!! You have renewed it in this little story. Thank you for entering this poem.


  • Lulu Gee silver member
    October 5

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    Oh, I can identify with this, not with a key but words spoken to a loved one.
    I loved this poem and the format was splendid.
    Best of luck in the contest.
    Lulu


  • klassy lassy
    October 4

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    It's said eyes are windows to the soul, but there are surely doors within each of us not so obvious to the world and the key shared is a cherished treasure, indeed, to unlock that which is born of one's heart in the giving. Wonderful poetry.

    Karen


  • glenn shannon silver member
    October 4

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    excellent tale Paul very interesting and clever didnt know what to expect and a cool surprise best of luck in that comp bro

  • writeonhorses
    October 4

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    interesting interpretation, very sweet. good luck in the contest!

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